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Need input for the next chapter~

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(TL;dr: Thank you watchers~ I want some input on ideas i have for future stories. see below for more info. I'd also like more input on what everyone likes/dislikes about the story so far so I can focus on those elements.)

So, first of all, 16 watcher, 16 favorites, 800 views~ This is awesome~ Thank you all for your time and consideration!

But I'm here because I'd like some input. I've caught up posting what I've had written for the "My Mom's Boyfriend" story, and I've had some ideas for what to do with the next scene, but I'm still thinking it over. I don't want to get TOO explicit between the characters yet, but I don't know how much more I could push the envelope before it gets super explicit... So here are some scene idea I'm thinking about exploring.

Tearing Clothes: (includes wardrobe malfunction, exhibitionism, humiliation, accidental exposure) Now that Jaqui has a new wardrobe, he old clothes are probably worn and torn. Carol would normally just throw them out, or donate the good stuff... Vulpes however would take those hole-filled shirts and TEAR THEM OFF LIKE THE HULK! >=D This gives Jaqui some ideas to work with; Either tearing clothes at home and going a little too far, or perhaps she wears a set of worn clothes for the last time, intending on ceremoniously tearing through them that evening, but perhaps a day at the park/store is just a bit too much for them to handle~

Sketching her parents: (exhibitionism, exposure, underwear) Being encouraged to draw by Vulpus has got Jaqui back into drawing more and more. She wants more experience, but can't find any good references for what she wants to draw, so she asks Vulpes, and even Carol to pose for her. Of course, she wants to draw the muscles,  the limbs, seeing every part and drawing every detail. How far will the two go to inspire her artistic vision? Something tells me Carol is a LOT more open to the idea than Vulpes~

Backyard camping: (exhibitionism, bathroom play, cuddling for warmth, or undressing from the heat.) Someone has a bright idea of camping, but with school coming up soon they decide to just have a quickie camp in the backyard. Jaqui wants the REAL outdoor experience, so no cell phones, TV, running water.... And after her last attempt at peeing outside, she needs someone to teach her to use the bathroom in the wilderness. Plus i imagine they overprepare for a chilly night, only to find it tepid at best... But no giving up! Gotta push through and have a successful camping trip... so... undress as needed~

Vulpes/Carol sex scene: (adult sex, voyeuristic preteen~) The two lovebirds have had plenty of sex since moving in, just hasn't been 'caught' but what if they DID get caught? or spied on? Would they only be going at it in their room? Or maybe they think they have the house to themselves and go at it in the kitchen? maybe they toy around with one another in front of Jaqui, trying to be sneaky about it? I want more Vulpes/Carol moments, i want to show that they ARE in love, despite Vulpes having 'trouble' adjusting to life with a daughter.

Truth or dare: (not sure what this could include honestly, so many possibilities~) Some of Jaqui's friends come over for a game of Truth or Dare, and of course, they try to embarrass each other in front of her step dad, and each other.

I do still have an idea for her finding her parent's anal plug tail and trying it on without knowing how to handle it, but I want that to be the sort of tipping point where they start getting INTENTIONALLY kinky~ So not yet... Maybe that could be a dare with her friends~?

Let me know what you've thought of the story so far, that way I know what elements people like so i can continue to create that sort of content.

I'm Also working on a few other stories that will work better on other sites, but one i might share on Inkbunny would be a slice of life story with a potion's master and his assistant. Kinky fun with potions~ Fun times right? it would certainly be more kink focused, but I do want them to also have a nice relationship with one another, so it might have a slow burn to start. Feel free to drop some ideas for that too~
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Added: 2 years, 8 months ago
 
Masterofall
2 years, 8 months ago
I like the Truth or Dare amd tearing clothes idea.
SFX64X
2 years, 8 months ago
The more I think about it, the more I think the Truth or Dare will be later... Young impressionable signs putting peer pressure on one another to do things they wouldn't do themselves? That's gonna get sexual REAL fast~

But I do think the clothes tearing will be in the next chapter~ We'll see.
Masterofall
2 years, 8 months ago
Alright
Masterofall
2 years, 8 months ago
Another idea would be backyard camping. Just a father/daughter thing with Vulpes and Jaqui, Jaqui  knows how hot it's going to be, and plans to wear her new fox onesie, but desides to not wear underwear as a way to keep cool. At some point, when she has to go to the restroom, she 'forgets' to close the back of the Onesie back up.
SFX64X
2 years, 8 months ago
Ooooh, yeah, that's a good idea~ I might just implement that~ Fun times~
killer7t
2 years, 8 months ago
Could have Jaqui try and "imitate" Vulpes's hulking out, and do it with some of her old clothes laying around, however with a few well placed cuts and tears, it ends up being not just her shirt and pants that rip.
SFX64X
2 years, 8 months ago
I'm writing the next chapters now, and it may or may not contain more clothes tearing~
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