For those of you not following me, I posted a journal the other day about a comic series I'd like to start about a trainer who goes around battling and also having sex with his pokemon.
I can't decide if I want it to be a comic, or a fan fic, or a hybrid of both with an single image followed by a chapter of text.
Either way, here is an insert of something I came up with for the story. I'll set it up for you.
The trainer (who I am probably going to call Mako, but I haven't decided, yet) has just caught his first pokémon, a Growlithe, and has run away from his town to become a pokemon trainer.
He had very little money with him, and so for the first week or so he had to survive on only what he had in his bank account, which was very little. Not nearly enough to survive on, and without a pokémon license he can't challenge trainers to official battles to earn money, or gyms to earn badges.
So, our hero is on his way to a town about five days walk away from his own town to speak with a student he met online, who can fix the broken pokédex that he found, and possibly hack the license inside of it so that it registers to him.
The following scene takes place on night two of the walk.
I can't believe that I'm out here, catching pokemon. This is an adventure, I can't even begin to imagine what this is going to be like. I'm going to need money, a license; maybe get a bike or something. “Grow?” My newest pokemon looks up to me, breaking my train of thought. “What is it, Growlithe?” I notice that Growlithe is peering off into the bushes just a bit to my left, they're beginning to rustle. It could be a wild pokemon... “Growlithe, get up.” I come to a stand, but Growlithe remains seated, watching me instead.
I don't think she's a bad pokemon, I mean, I just caught her yesterday, but I thought that pokemon where meant to be loyal companions, friends even. This one doesn't seem to like me very much ever since I caught her. “Growlithe. Get up.” I speak a little more firmly. “Grow!” She turns her nose up to me, looking away from my face just as a wild pokemon steps out of the bushes, most likely attracted by the can of beef stew I've opened a few minutes ago. “Rah Rah!” It's a tiny little thing, not more than a foot tall. I really wish that Pokedex was working, I have no idea what this thing is. “Growlithe, do you know what kind of pokemon this is?” Why am I asking her? She can't tell me.. “Rah! Ralts Ralts!” A small white pokemon in what appears to be a night gown with what I can only assume are green leaves hung down in it's face. I feel like if it walked too fast it would trip over it's own feet. “Ralts? Your name is Ralts?” I bent down to one knee, extending my hand to the little pokemon, though it backed away from me meekly. “Grow! Growlithe!” Growlithe looked back over to where I was, she was barking something towards the Ralts, who became frightened and fell backwards away from me. “Oh! Are you okay, little guy?” I reached out, helping the Ralts back to a stand while dusting off it's knees and legs. It began a shouting match with my Growlithe. The tiny pokemon looked up at me after a few minutes of arguing, and then down at the can of beef stew that was simmering by the fire. “I see. You're hungry, is it?” I asked while sitting down with my legs crossed by the fire. “Well, there isn't much... But you're welcome to have some.” Growlithe shot me a glare from where she was sitting, she could probably understand that it'd be another mouth to feed, and there was only the one can as it is. I paid her no mind as the little Ralts took a seat in front of me, warming it's hands on the fire. “It's going to be cold tonight.” I sighed into the night air, noticing that I could see my breath.
Now there is a very good start! I like how this is beginning, it will truly be a battle to get by with pretty much nothing since there is not much he can do until he either has a license or a forged license. Hopefully Officer Jenny will not find out it's forged should he ever come across her at some point... who knows what kind of ramifications that might have! >~_^<
Now there is a very good start! I like how this is beginning, it will truly be a battle to get by wi
Yes indeed! In the 30+ years I have been writing, I have done my fair share of foreshadowing, and cliffhanging... *chuckles* And being inspired, I have to admit your idea is in fact inspiring me to start doing a bit more with my own Lady trainer >~_^<
Yes indeed! In the 30+ years I have been writing, I have done my fair share of foreshadowing, and cl
*chuckles* Ooo, and who knows, who knows... She'd have to go easy on him, though, or he would have to get pretty darn good, for it to not be a lost battle from the get-go, as Lady Katie's team - all-female, all-feline - is pretty high level, they're all six somewhere between level 80 and 90, hee. But hey, if nothing else, at least it will be a very good challenge, and she might even have a tip or two to share since she has very sexual relationships with her own pokégirls as well >~_^<
Well, that is certainly not a bad thing! >~_^< *chuckles* Ooo, and who knows, who knows... She'd ha
Ah, who knows, it could very well be, indeed. I mean, I don't know very much about her as of yet - all I know so far is that she was born into the Lady rank, and that her childhood pet was the purrloin who became her first battle pokémon and is now her team-leading liepard. And I know that she got several vintage pokéballs (such as a love ball, a moon ball and a dream ball) from her grandmother who used to travel through several of the pokémon regions *chuckles* And I know that she already used to have a sexual relationship as a preteen with the purrloin before she even set out on her own journey to explore the world and catch and train more pokémon, hee.
So, yeah, she is still a rather blank canvas as a matter of fact, and she could very well be encountered during the early days of her journey when she was just setting out with her purrloin, even before it evolved into the liepard she has now, hee >^_^<
Ah, who knows, it could very well be, indeed. I mean, I don't know very much about her as of yet - a
Haha! well, I actually try to not make any of my characters too Mary Sue-ish, but I suppose sometimes it can't be helped, despite the clever explanations I may think of to justify some of the character's traits =P
Haha! well, I actually try to not make any of my characters too Mary Sue-ish, but I suppose sometime
Ah yes, that is true. After all, when you create a character, you tend to put something of yourself into it in more or lesser degree *chuckles* And I even do that when fleshing out characters I adopted.
Ah yes, that is true. After all, when you create a character, you tend to put something of yourself
Yea, it is kind of a trait among many fan fic writers to have a degree of affinity towards their own creations, and may even add a little of themselves to them as well.
I have done it myself to an extent with a few I have made up. I could say MakoRuu's comment of "Totes Mary Sue." fits mine as well. For some of us our creations is at times like a child, we may wont the best for them, and seeing them being able to triumph over any adversity is the wish of many writers. Myself included. ^.^
However, in some of my stories, they don't always triumph, but merely survive a bad situation. And they don't always have things go their own way. Sometimes (do to my own inner cruel thinking >.<) they often enough find themselves suffering through adversity instead. 0.o
Yea, it is kind of a trait among many fan fic writers to have a degree of affinity towards their own
Oh absolutely! And I'm not even a fan fic writer - even though I have written several in my early years, but I have always written tons of stories, and the first few years I wrote them in first person perspective as well because that helped me write better, so that probably has a lot to do with it. And even while I have been writing for some 33 years now and have created numerous characters, I have always cared for all of them very much. I may put some of my characters in bad situations, or make them go through losses or something, but I have always said, and I still stand firmly by that; I will not ever kill off any of my characters, never ever, period. Not gonna happen.
*chuckles* And of course, for certain characters I created for specific purposes, I do Mary-Sue them to a certain degree because I just want them to be the best I can make them for one reason or the other. Such as the trainer Mako and I were talking about here; I made her a Lady class because I simply like that model from the games the best (and I wanted her to have that hat), and I gave her a few very specific pokéballs because I like the look of them the best, but after doing some research on when those types of balls actually appeared in the games (since I have only quite recently gotten into pokémon and simply did not know very much about it), I came up with, by lack of a better term, an excuse that would make her having those balls in the current time-line plausible.
Oh absolutely! And I'm not even a fan fic writer - even though I have written several in my early ye
i personaly i would like the fan fic style more as i have found its easer to conect whith the chareters with comics there often cricker to read as there is less discribeing needed but it feales more like your just watching what happens from an outside prospective
i personaly i would like the fan fic style more as i have found its easer to conect whith the charet
the hybrid style would keep both groups content it has part of both worlds but the down side is that it would probably take longer to do as you would have 2 things to work on the story and the image and would need to make both relevant to each other
the hybrid style would keep both groups content it has part of both worlds but the down side is that
But of course, still I like the combo of picture and writing, much as I would like to see the comic, I'm almost more interested in the story than the visuals, but I'm a big fan of reading and imagining such things.
But of course, still I like the combo of picture and writing, much as I would like to see the comic,
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