This was yesterdays' InkTober submission. It was a little more ambitious in detail, so I didn't finish at work. Also, finding a word or series of words to rhyme with fortune is a bitch. I like to say fortune as "for-chin", but for sake of the limerick, it is pronounced "for-choon". >_< "This ancient desert tomb Will bring to all your ruin. A silent creeping doom For those who seek its' fortune."
Even if there was no mummy involved, once they start loading bags and pockets... they'll quickly discover just how heavy gold and jewels become. That "Yippieeeeeee" would quickly turn into "Oh Crappppp..." :3 Ah, I should have drawn a Scrooge McDuck mummy jumping out of the gold pile towards them! Regrets of the artiost. >_<
Even if there was no mummy involved, once they start loading bags and pockets... they'll quickly dis
They got so brave and bold. To go and take some gold. Their eyes lit up with glee. On their little pillaging spree. But this way to get wealthy. Proved not to be so healthy. For they found it takes a dummy. To go tangle with a mummy.
I also thought of a good rhyme : They got so brave and bold. To go and take some gold. Their eyes l
Nice to be able to word in a story to the rhyme. Some people have a clear lack of talent, but not you! <3 I try very hard to incorporate the InkTober word-of-the-day into my limericks, and making use of odd words like Fortune or Orange, well... sometimes rhyming something can be a heck of a challenge! >_<
Nice to be able to word in a story to the rhyme. Some people have a clear lack of talent, but not yo
