Hi everyone!
I hate to go back and work on pages I already posted, because it feels like I work on stuff that didn't mean real progress... but I also received some negative opinions related to the grammar mostly of the first pages back then - and mostly I have to agree with them -, so after getting some help and encouragement I did what I should have done probably a lot earlier and fixed many typos and grammar mistakes mostly in the early pages of the comic.
I don't want to make a list of people who helped to pointed out these things at some time, because there were so many, that I couldn't make the list complete, but I want to thank you all!
Well, probably still not perfect, but those will remain as they are now. There are things that can be better, but never be perfect. ^^
I know some readers download the pages, so if you are one of them, it's a good time to update the archive.
Ohh, just one last thing for the collectors. The list of pages updated:
Chapter 1 - Pages 6, 7, 9, 10, 12, 14, 16, 17, 18, 20
Chapter 2 - Pages 1, 2, ,3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 12, 17, 18, 19, 23, 28
Chapter 3 - Pages 4, 8, 19, 26
Chapter 4 - Page 28
Chapter 5 - Page 18
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